Trying

Aww its kinda sad... i love it tho... great job!!!
~*~Skye~*~

I like this.
I can relate to it.

Very well written.
=]
x

I liked this piece because it was an obvious portrayal of emotion, my fave lines were:

she needs to sleep
but shes scared to dream

they were really effective.
However my criticism is that it is nothing original and had something quite cliche about it, regardelss it was a good poem, i just felt that i had heard it before (maybe i'd read it before lol)
xxx

A sad piece but very well written.

THat is sad. ..but you did a good job.

==Lindsey.