The Ritual
by Mr M Jun 17, 2007
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As our eyes find their secret smiles, |
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16 years ago
by TamborineMan
The imagery in this poem, as with the others of yours I've read, is very unique. Although I still enjoyed this one quite a bit, I felt that the symbolism paled the emotional aspect of the poem. It's well written and enjoyable to read, but I didn't feel an emotional investment at the end. Still, kudos on the good work
