Non satisfactory

by bleeding limegrenn   Jun 17, 2007


I'm not good enough
I'm to fat
I'm ugly
no one wants me,friend nor foe

now i sit her empty hearted
with only one friend
he holds tightly never letting go

i say my final goodbye
and see you in heaven

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This poem has a good idea but i think you need some more strucutre to it.. also you could describe your emotions more to help the reader feel your pain... but its a good start to a poem, probaby a 3/5 but i will vote 5 anyway

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