The war with the mirror

by xo kisses xo   Jun 17, 2007


A young beautiful girl.
Gorgeous as could be
Held a deadly secret
No-one would believe.

Meals went uneaten
What went in came right out
A war with the mirror
Is what this is about.

Smaller and smaller she became
slowly withering away
Her healthiness and body
Got worse every day.

But she was ever so happy
That she was losing weight
She didn't know how deadly it was
Until it was too late

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  • 15 years ago

    by dreamer88

    You created a poem we can all relate to...and its so captivating to the audience...well done...it gets the message accross and its in the news alot x greatly expressive poem. well done. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    So, she died because of diet? ^^
    How tragic.. ><
    I like your idea.
    It flows nicely too..
    Wonderful poem.. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by endswithgoodbye

    Wow , what a great poem
    loved the way it flowed and the truth it captured
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow that was sooo good! so many people are facing this problem today, and I think that a lot of people can relate to this poem... 5/5 from me, and you are such an amazing writer... keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say.
    it was very into depth as well as intriguing and capturative. i wouldn't change a thing :)
    5/5 love.

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