Puke Zone

by beautiful xx disaster   Jun 19, 2007


As she combs her hair,
Tears mask her face,
Those tears take care,
Of her heart's race,
As she wipes her eyes,
She starts to shake,
He can't hear her cries,
Shes busy being fake,
Taking off the smears,
She looks once more,
There comes the tears,
She falls to the floor,
There is writing on the wall,
It makes her want to moan,
Its all over the wall,
"This is a no puke zone",
She takes out a sharpie,
Crosses out some words,
Feels her heart beat,
Those kids are just nerds,
Balances one more time,
Fingers down her throat,
Up she feels it climb,
All because of the note you wrote.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is interesting, idea is original. I like how you wrote this one, it is short but very effective. Some lines are really excellent. It deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    Holy crap.
    That was AMAZING!
    One of my favourite poems on this site!
    Just.. WOW. im amazed at the moment.
    The end really finished it off with a pow!
    Another great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    This poem is kinda different but oh well who isnt these days i like it keep it up
    carly

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    This is a really good poem! 5/5! Keep it up!
    Sarah xx