Open, close

by OvShak   Jun 20, 2007


Open, close
I see you coming in
Grabbing me and looking at me

I don't understand you
You seem a complete mess
Letting me go I see you smoking again

Screaming in my face
It doesn't make sense
You'll never let me go
And you'll never let me live

Opening the door and running away
He comes out and sees me going away
Running after me and soon catching up

You push me to the ground
And scream out your lungs
You dig into your pockets
And find a gun

Open, close
I see the doctor coming in
Examining my conditions
From a year ago

Visiting you now
I stand smaller than ever before
With tears in my eyes
I see you fading away

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  • 16 years ago

    by Perfectly Imperfect vaney

    Wow..emotional..i loved it 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Mel

    Wow, again that was really intense. sad too. good word choice again.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    I think u've bein hiddin ur poetic skillz from us lil jess aww... ur poem was full of emotion it was sad and intense loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    RAWRRRR!
    my little ovshak has poetical skills!!!!!!
    :))))))))))))
    this was effing amazing. Emphasising on the effing.
    ilyyou.
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is a very emotiv poem!..and has alot of depth to it:D great job!!
    bree x