A race to the end

Im not totally sure what this is about...
but even so, the wording and intenseness like forced emotion on me.
good job.

"Wasting away
Underneath what the media portrays
Hidden away from reality
This isn't real"

Thats it. Your getting a "Vannessa Comment"
Bottomless pocket. You are not ceasing my amazement! You are effing brilliant.
:)))))))

Awww... my beautiful Jess
I loved it! You wrote about something real I loved your description of everything!
I loved your poem and I love you ! 5/5!

Great poem..simple yet effect at tahe same time
neevr stop writing
bree x