Its amazing...
i like the ending the most...
and the flow was also good..

Very sweet..love it!..

Sooo cute i love this type of a story/poem good job 5/5

That was beautiful ^_^ If only real life was so kind =( Anyway, fantastic poem =) 5/5
Rhea

P.S. Thanks so the great comment =) I'm glad you liked it ^_^

Beautiful ,love does and will come true but it takes time.

Beautiful ,love does and will come true but it takes time.

Incredible ending part to that one a story told very well!!

Very uplifting write. Everyone who see's someone they truly are attracted to, we feel the urge to be confident and go up to meet that person. Easier said than done, I'm afraid. Very enjoyable poem.

Wow, it's really nice and true. It's really of the best. 5/5 xxx