I really like this pome
even thou it's short
it says a lot!
5/5

Hun, I'm not sure what you mean by "it" and its locked up. Very short also. Add more lines and Im sure it'll be a hit.

I really like this one too....its kinda dark and mysterious......try adding onto your poems and making them longer it'll help with the flow

Ah! I liked this poem!
I know that feeling too well.
And yesh.Short but meaningful ^^

Keep Smiling x

Add more and this poem will be awesome...it shows true feelings though...good imagery...5/5

Only one thing i saw wrong, revel should be reveal hun. Yet, 5/5 work again. :)

-Liz-

Hey,
its a nice poem, maybe you should try to make it longer? and it sounds beter if you wrote 'why wont you let me out?' instead of wont you let me out, the same with wont you quiet down? and revel should be reveal.. but I really like this poem, I think its one of your best ones.. and the flow is ngood too, 5/5
kisses stephanie

I like this poem. personal, short, meaningfull.
your very tallented

Oh wow!!!!!!! this exactly how you feel, so well explained! i love this poem for its honesty, and your way of writing short but meaningful poems, is a great talent, dont wste it, keep writing!
nuff luv xx

This Is A Really Good Poem.. Short.. But Explains [[E V E R Y T H I N G]] && I Know How You Feel

Once again. Short but to the point. It captures how it feels when you need to say something you know you can't. Only one correction that is major enough to warrent me pointing it out is that you mispelled 'reveal'. It threw me off at first. Anyways good job.

This is pretty good! I like it!! Keep up the good work....

HEHE it reminds me of how i feel about this guy named luke i really like him but NO ONE WILL NO exept you OOPS

Aww i know how you feel because i got feelings hidden inside of me too and im scared to let them out. 5/5

Good poem. 5/5
manda

Great poem!!!!!!!! love it... kinda to short but yea short poems are always good

Ok yeah another good poem keep it up = ] i would like to see you do one long one though but you dont have to im jsut curious how a long one would come out for you = ]

That is so short but it still gets the point across. Very nice flow. Good rhyme. 5/5

Once again cap every new line and I's. Most of your poems are short so it gets good than stops. What I would do, as you build and get better, use them in new poems. I do every so often. BUt I like this one very very much. 5/5

My favorite of all. you have talent i must say.i've felt that feeling once too many times. well done. =]
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