Blank Words (Collab with Sam)

by Mo   Jun 21, 2007


He writes flawless words for her
Verses that past a great land
For her face he does not know
And his love, I shall not understand

He wraps sonnets in mementos
Gifts of which we cannot see
For we do not have his lovers eyes
For we do not hold loves serenity

He sows words of utter beauty
Weaves tales of how he'll pursue
For his eyes are ablaze with passion
And his quill is his tongue of virtue

He ponders his lilies in essence
Making sure that they are all pure
For his love deserves perfection
And his heart is all but demure

And after the sands of time passes
He pines his life to the bones
Awaiting that perfect moment
To secure himself in the unknown

This man he has loved wholly
And his love is but a moment away
But he will never feel her touch
His heart did his shyness betray

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Written as a Collab with Bleeding for His Amusement (Thanks for the inspiration Sam - you're a wicked chick and a great writer)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Perfect. Deeply written and a good vocabulary. I liked the choice of every word and the flow was great. Nicely done. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Solus

    Its sad that people don't always get what they want....or need. I think this is amazing and hope to see more of the same.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww what a beautiful collab poem :) This poem really deserve a 5/5! it was perfect :D The flow, the choice of words.. Everything :) Fantastic work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i read this in smanta's profile. you guys did a great job writting a perfect poem. you guys are so great. keep it up.
    a 5/5 from me cause you really deserve it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I read this at samantha's but reading twice didn't really make it boring unlikely I enjoyted it and I thought you two did a great job
    And watch out that spit from your Ilama..oh god mo!! lol
    Keep it up hun,
    Laura