Forever Here

As I lay in lamentation,
I wish forever I could be yours,
Although your love is wish someone else,
Forever will Ill be here for you.

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16 years ago
by Nix

I don't like it. I know that you can write a lot better. This is too simple and it isn't original. It could be longer and atmosphere could be stronger.
16 years ago
by Shirani Graham

WonderfuL! excellenT! mE luV diS writinG. keeP uP yR gooDS worK..

goD blesS yoU....

>>>>>luzaN
16 years ago
by Shirani Graham

Writing pleasure from you and the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

Nazeer
16 years ago
by WiNgS Of StEeL

Its short but its still worth the read..gr8 job
4/5/
bree
16 years ago
by I love jake

Thats a really sweet poem short but so cute awesome job

alot of love
hailey