Broken Flowers

by Mommy And Me   Jun 22, 2007


Broken Flowers

Sitting upon her rusted swing set
She looks at her forget me not
Caressing the lavender-blue petals
Her tears fall upon the ancient green leaf

"Remember when it was you and me
When things were not of tears and pain
With me plucking these petals one by one
Deciphering if you love me or not"

A picture torn down the middle
With only a hand to show there was another
She stares upon his great empty space
As she whispers her pain of what he has done.

"You were my super man, I was your angel
Together we made such a perfect pair
But now I am here, upon this swing
In which you and me used to play around"

With her old tree house to her left,
And the sun setting to her right
She looks down at the forget me not
And she slips away into her bliss

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dedicated to my only one :love: Garry :love:

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  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Thats a great poem... It set a mood... I was touched and i hope that my poems can be as great as this. Its going in my favs ^_^ well keep up the good work... poems like these should beh published!!!
    ~*~Skye~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was a very good poem
    and it was very descirptive
    and i thought it had a great ending

    "Sitting upon her rusted swing set
    She looks at her forget me not
    Caressing the lavender-blue petals
    Her tears fall upon the ancient green leaf"

    favorite part ^^

    i loved this part becuase of how you used
    the colors as not just regular colors

    you made them a certain color

    5/5

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