Show me that you really care

by ECILA ice   Jun 22, 2007


Would you let me fall,
from broken promise of eternity?
Or will you ever save my soul,
from falling to unwanted misery?

I'm hanging at the edge of the cliff
Slowly losing my grip,
At the bottom is an open casket of reality
Waiting for me to lie down in agony

Would you let the blue flame
Burn our little paradise,
Leaving with nil more to claim
And watch our Eden as it slowly dies?

Or put out the merciless fire
And save our passion and desire
Rejuvenate beauty that's starting to fade
Restore Eden from becoming dead

Do you even care?
Show me then if you really do
Save me if you dare
Lead me to heaven as you promise me too

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  • 14 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    I really like this poem, i like the questions do you really care, cuz i can relate. i hate when people are fake and dont really care, yet they say that they do. idk, those were my thoughts as i read ur poem. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Filled with emotion. Beautiful write.

    _Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by christina

    I LUV THIS POEM!!

  • 16 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    I like it because it was meanfull and it rhym ( I like when it rhym ) and you got it to sound well. good job

  • 16 years ago

    by janiL

    Amazing!
    simply amazing!

    ..yun lang..^__^