Unknown

by Reminders Torture   Jun 23, 2007


She watches him and sits at her desk.
seeing him laugh,sing and giggle.
she knows she can't have him.
because she is unknown.

she sits there and watches him.
though she knows she can't have him.
because he has fallen in love with,
some one else,a friend of hers.

let her heart break and it will,
mend again,she watches on being,
unknown.all the things she feel.
but he may never know what she feels.

she watches him sit there and giggle.
she knows she can't have him.
though she loves him a lot.
because she is unknown.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like it, it's very descriptive and somehow touching, every stanza contains many emotions.
    The title is greatly related to the whole piece, you found excellent word to describe that girl's feelings.
    I think that a lot of people can relate to this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by sadeyes

    Your poem was good I liked the flow Your friend Lisa Ann

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Okay in the last stanza.

    It should say though instead of thought. [In my opinion]
    And also instead of allot it should say a lot. Once again in my opinion.

    Just those small mistakes.

    Other than that it was a great poem.
    Thank you for your comment on my poem.
    Take care.

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