Stranger

by Reminders Torture   Jun 24, 2007


My hair is so messy and tangles.
my eyes are filled with tears.
I wipe the warm tears away.
as I'm trying to rid myself of my fears.

I am looking in the mirror.
but yet I don't know who I see.
all I know is that,
this sad sight couldn't be me.

I cover the image in the mirror.
with the palm of my hands.
I notice a cut on my finger.
that I will never have.

I laugh and then cry.
then I crumble to the floor.
suddenly I'm aware of my problems.
which I was never before.

my finger loses a drop of blood.
and nothing is what I have gained.
my heart throbs in anger.
my throat burns with pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Wow hun diz 1's rily nice.... =) keep up d gud work.... *mwahugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    Beautifull!!!!................nice poem well written

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great poem...i liked it alot..it was sad but very good..very well written...~*~Cindy~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Wow!! Excellent poem!!!
    It was so sad, very well written and expressed!!!
    Good job and keep it up =)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to some parts of this poem.
    It's greatly written, but some rhymes are too typical. Anyway, you put a lot of emotions in the whole piece, and created very vivid imagery.
    Keep up!

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