Cooling Darkness

by DragonGirl   Jun 24, 2007


I feel so lost, so lonely
in my chest i feel the tears
tears that choke me
inside and out.
I feel a great depression
standing right besides me
squeezing the tears out of me.
Trees tower over me
making me feel scared
making the depression worse.
I can't find my way
I feel lost and useless
while my depression covers me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    A strong emotional vibe...some interesting imagery nothing actually intense but fitting with the emotional aspect. It's sad but for some reason I think with a word or two added this could also be a darker piece. Still the lonely/depression thing works cuz of the emotions portrayed.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Deep emotion strong sense of state very well writtten great job
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This poems shows that u r really depressed. words just came out of ur heart. liked it. keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats sad xx good writing xx

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