Life (tanka)

by Hatori   Jun 29, 2007


Love to make you weak,
Loss to make you cry in pain,
Friends to pick you up,
Whether it is good or bad,
Life will make it possible.

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This is the first tanka I have ever written, so don't mind a couple of mistakes...

Tanka: a Japanese poem consisting of 31 syllables in 5 lines, with 5 syllables in the first and third lines and 7 in the others.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    Short and sweet. I like the last line a lot 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Niice poem! its going in my favs i like that style...=D and my fav part ish:
    Love to make you weak,
    Loss to make you cry in pain
    that ish so cool ^_^ nice choice in words...=DD

    ~*~skYe~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Niice poem! its going in my favs i like that style...=D and my fav part ish:
    Love to make you weak,
    Loss to make you cry in pain
    that ish so cool ^_^ nice choice in words...=DD

    ~*~skYe~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by 2AStarOfEfinity

    Hey, it was pretty good at that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I'd say this is a great poem you have!

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