Hold my hand

by Boy   Jun 30, 2007


::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
I will show you the things, I have planned

::::::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
Looking at each other we can fly

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
Dancing on the clouds we will cross sky

:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
I will let you go near moon and stars

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
By touching the stars, we will reach across the heavens

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
I will show the marvelous beauty of God

:::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
I will let you go the next world

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Hold my hand
I will bring you back in this green land

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  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Beautiful repitition, good flow, great expression. Love Greta xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    This is really really good ...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow! Beautiful poem. It is very original and greatly written. Form of this piece is unique and excellent. Atmosphere that you create with majestic wording is superb. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Holding hands is such a simple thing, but theres many complexities that lay behind it..so much meaning, and you captured many of its aspects in this writing here...amazing work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is ...frikken awesome.
    I LOVE this.
    I found it to be original and unique in concept, and a very refreshing read.
    The flow was perfect throughout the entire piece and once again the imagery painted created very vivid pictures.

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