The Randomness of Shooting Stars
by Twisted Heart Jul 1, 2007
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From which direction do they come |
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16 years ago
by Mommy And Me
:) you can deffinatly write all types of poems and still come out sounds good. there is one line in here i found didn't fit like the rest though
"On these I look then make a wish"
other wise it was great -
16 years ago
by Amy
What an amazing poem! I love it!
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16 years ago
by SADADDY
This is a wonderful write, it makes one think of the wonder of it all. Thank you for your excellent write. May your heart always be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.
sadaddy -
16 years ago
by Lu
From which direction do they come
And when they fall, where do they land
Do stars that shoot across the sky
Get swept inside God's gentle hands
^^^
Jeannie I love this stanza!
You are indeed the queen of uniqueness .... you never stop amazing me with the topics that flow so freely from your pen, dear friend.
Wonderful .... wonderful read Auntie!
Luanne -
16 years ago
by *Charisma*
Beautiful poem! I love it because I am a huge fan of the stars! :) They are my favorite creation! The title was very catchy! I really enjoyed this piece!
Charisma*
