Sonnet IX

by Mr M   Jul 1, 2007


I look behind me and see the sunsets
and footprints in the paths of places I
have been. I look to the sky at a much
closer distance and see raging, passing

storms. I look ahead of me and see the
sunrise, the smooth sandy paths of places
I have yet to travel and then, out far
ahead of me, the violent coming storms.

But when I look beside me and I see
your gaze and feel your touch and hear your small
quiet, gentle voice, I always sense your mind there

above the present storms around us. That's
when I look within me and find your heart
and dreams and soul becoming part of mine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Awww that was gorgeous!!!
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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written poem, with superb imagery. Choice of words is excellent, and the atmosphere through the whole sonnet is great. 5/5