WOW that was so sad and so descriptive so much depth so much emotion 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Good job, I cant really find anything wrong with this poem.. Your really good at writting them and you use very good vocab. I will give you a 5/5. Great job.

WOW< that was a really emotional poem
i loved how you worded it, it
as great
and it flowed
perfectly

you have a wide vocabulary
good job
and keep it up

a well deserved

5/5

Tighten up the lines, in order to augment the flow. Other than that, I actually find this piece quite beautiful and emotive; in fact, I adored how you've portrayed a teardrop, "...full of thousand emotions
all trapped inside clear crystal cage". 'twas fairly vivid and satirical as well. :) Nicely done. ~Marian

I loved the emotion portrayed throughout this piece but as Debbie (Marian) said some lines could be tightened to make the flow much better. the way you portrayed a tear drop I agree with Deb so beautiful I loved that part and I truely felt the emotions pouring from this poem. Well done on creating such a beautiful piece. ~mel

Another 5/5 you are a really great poet way better then me haha well yeah i have to say im a little jealous lol but yeah your a really great poet

This poem was really amazing. Very descriptive and clear. It was easy to see the images you were describing and you're vocabulary is awesome. Those words give it a unique twist.
Well done.

Wow.

this is absolutley awesome, it really made me feel peace in the first few stanzas and then a sharp pain in the fourth, amazing writing
xxx
thanks for the comment btw =]

This was very different and I could picture it all happening as you tell the story. Great wording and good idea for a poem. However, I would just suggest you read through it again as there are a few minor words missing here and there that could make it flow a bit easier.

Liked it a lot.

Mo

It is dark and sad. It was wonderful, It was incredibly descriptful, It painted a clear picture and the emotion was strong, It was a great piece, 5/5

This poem has such devotion and passion, can really feel it jump out of the page.. well screen! lol. very beautiful 5/5

Beautiful Imagery, you are very talented,
"How I loved it dear,
loved every moment you kill me. "

- Sad words, easy to relate to
Keep It Up

Very very deep... Very powerful ending, it was effective. I love your style of writing, you always create amazing atmosphere.
Well done! 5/5