Thanks for sharing that its very moving to read xxx

I think this has the best beat ever /like if you read it like song

i loved the beat

this is so good
goin on my favorites
5/5

Aww.. It reminded me of someone :( I like it.. The emotions was strong.. Good job.. I think the title was perfect, well done.

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM I GOTTA ADD IT TO MY FAVORITS BUT IT IS VERY WELL WRITTEN I LOVE THE FLOW AND THE ENDING HAD ME IT WAS GREAT

Great poem and its dedication also belongs to me. You have well described your feelings and very well penned. This piece has all poetic qualities. Its just 5/5 all the way. Tc

That was really good and so sad. Your flow was really good and it had a sort of beat to it that made it really unique. I like the way you penned it together. I could feel each word speaking out with emotion. Excellent job : ]]

This is by far going on my favorite poem list. Nice job.

This was really sad.I loved the beat it had.Another great poem.

Wow, this has a very good and strong flow it in, and it really is nice to read. And it is full of emotion, just love it. =) Keep it up.

I liked the flow throughout this poem it was strong and the ryhme choice was simple yet pretty effective. I found this to be sad holding deep emotions. An enjoyable read none the less. Well done on writing this poem.

5/5
~mel

Great poem 5/5

Great poem or song? i really like it. it had the flow of a poem, but the beat of a song! it's also sad and the emotion is there in every line. good work keep it up. 5/5

A song, a true song
i wrote for you ago
your song, your one song
you've said you'd always know

aww very cute i love it!!!
good and steady flow!!! Great Job. 5/5

Wow i really like this poem alot. u can tell its true from the heart. i rate this a 5

It was amazingly written, i loved it. the flow was great, and it just melted together perfectly. 5/5

Beautifully written, gosh, great flow, n i love that its so purely written frm ur heart

So sad..but beautiful..well done..deep words..wonderful piece..enjoyable to read.
Take care...~sarah~

You've got some great flow going on in this poem. However, you need to work on consistency with capitalization and grammar. The last line, which should be very powerful, falls apart slightly, only because "your" (possession) should be "you're" (you are).

Here are two lines I found to be very weak:
'don't lie there down and sad'
and
'and tell me it's all good'

Except for those minor faults, this poem strikes me. Wonderful topic. I sense that this pulls the heartstrings of those who can relate.

Good work. 5/5

Wow this is realy nice

Oh wow that was sssooo sad. I didnt expect it to be like that, the ending. This is so sad. Very touching and the flow was excellent.