NO Way Out

by Angel   Jul 2, 2007


He whispers to me
and I tremble
He talks to me
and I breathe
He yells at me
and I cry

He touches me
and I tremble
He kisses me
and I breathe
He hits me
and I cry

He cares for me
and I tremble
He loves me
and I breathe
He hates me
and I cry

I push back
and he trembles
I hold the gun
and he breathes
I pull the trigger
and he cries

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, it is very unusual and unique( in good way) You describe emotions very well. Atmosphere that you created is great, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    This is so sad, a girl should never have to live in fear !

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Wow i didnt see that cooming, this one is good
    i like it