Keep holding on

by ECILA ice   Jul 3, 2007


Thousand times my heart
Had been shattered
Through myriad parts
It was tattered
Yet never in my mind, not ever
I had thought to surrender
For the battle we can get over
For as long as we hold on together

Just promise me
To keep holding on
Promise to stay with me
and not leave me alone
Coz you're the mere strength in me
The blood that flows through my vein
So with you here with me
Pain will always turn vain

** i just revised one line so here's the real one

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  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow i loved it
    it wuz very sweet
    5/5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Beautiful. Could feel your emotions clear, loving warm and cute and same time being scared. Touching.
    Also, I liked the structure, very interesting, and it flowed great for me. Many can relate to this.
    Amazing write.
    5/5 Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww! so sweet. I love this poem. I think it was very cute and beautiful. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    It was good but there was to much rhyming and tht doesnt really work in this poetry technique 4/5 for a good poem but to many rhymes

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Another great piece. I find it to be very unique as to what others have mentioned.
    But I was expecting more. Still a 5/5

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