Cheater

by Kristina   Jul 3, 2007


I can't believe you cheated on me,
Used me like you did,
When I thought you really loved me.
I believed everything you said.

You were only messing with my mind.
Behind my back you were with other girls,
Doing things with them
That you shouldn't have been doing.

I was never unfaithful to you,
So I don't know why you were to me,
Lying to me about everything,
Like you didn't even care about me.

I guess I was nothing to you at all,
You just wanted to try to break my heart,
But it didn't work out that way,
I've learned that I only need myself.

Copyright © June 05, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great portrayl of emotions all throughtout. I'm sure many can relate to this one, as do I. The flow was wonderful. Cheaters suck. :] 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I liked the ending it was great way to finish it off
    but the only thing that i have a problem with
    is that you ended a million of the lines with the word "me

    and that can throw the flow off a little bit

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was so sad, yet so deep. it was well expressed. there was a lot of emotions in this one to. i bet a lot of people know how this feels. great work, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    That was really good, and there was obvious emotion in this... im so sorry that this had to happen to you, and i know a lot of people could relate to this... i will give it a 5/5 and thank you so much for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    I once had a girlfriend like that, so I can fit in with this poem. It was great and it flowed well. Good job. 5/5 ^_^.

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