Don't

by Loopy   Jul 3, 2007


Don't tell me your thoughts
Cause I'm not listening
Don't say I look fine
Cause inside I'm dying
Don't want your hand
It never helped a bit
Don't ever touch me again
Cause everything I touch turns to shit
Don't think I always speak the truth
Cause my fate is bound to lying
Don't think that I need you
This time I'll save myself from crying
And if I bleed
There's nothing you could do
I'll bleed to let you know
Never will I turn back to you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem, I like the atmosphere, it is unique. This poem is greatly written, also you described emotions very well.
    Don't think I always speak the truth
    Cause my fate is bound to lying
    ^My favorite lines.
    Keep up, this one truly deserves 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow powerful poem filled with hate and depth and transition 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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