Vision of loveliness.

by BlueDreams   Jul 4, 2007


I open my eyes, a vision materialists before me
Not in my wildest dreams, did I ever hope to see
Her wide smile, uncovers teeth so pearly white
Hair flowing down her cheeks, shining in the light.

There is a glint in her eyes, eyes that seem so deep
It doesn't take long at all, as into your heart she does creep
The sound of her voice lingers in the air
One forgets their worries, no longer has a care.

Like hearing the voice of an angel when she does talk
Elegance the way she dresses, sheer grace when she happens to walk
In life it doesn't matter how hard the struggle, how long the fight
Just to be near this vision, you see the world in a new light.

Each word she utters fills one with hope
Upon hearing her, you know you can cope
Her words constantly ring bells in my head
The ring and truth and hope in everything that is said.

Is she an apparition or is she real
I reach out, but it is never her that I feel
For all she has done, it is her I would like to hug and caress
Just as a way of thanking, this vision of loveliness.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    You're really good at writing love poems, keep it up. I like your choice of words, the opening stanza is good - it really attracts the reader's attention. Flow was smooth

    5/5! as always

  • 16 years ago

    by Ruby

    Oh wow... that was absolutely beautiful. Your talent is amazing and your emotions prominent. Keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    What a beautiful piece you have penned....Your words are breath taking. Like a song of love being sung. Imagery is wonderful :)
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Beautiful.....just so beautiful...your imagination and selection of words just so simply take me somewhere i always wanted to be...for reading your poems....one has to be well prepared in advance...with all helmets and seat belts... :o)
    on a serious note.....you are simply gift to this site...keep writing friend

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Bert.

    Such an absolutely beautiful write, dear friend. So many wonderful lines, I couldn't possibly pick favorites.

    Very heartfelt and emotional. Flowed like water from a river of dreams... or fantasy.

    Excellent job.

    Always,
    Jeannie

Read All Comments (10)

More Poems By BlueDreams