Rain

by Taz   Jul 4, 2007


I feel the anguish,
i feel the pain,
and i feel the peaceful rain.

you broke my heart,
and tore me apart.

you caused my pain,
and my tears to rain.

i feel so alone in this world that i rome.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SADADDY

    What power for so few words young lady. The pain is felt from being to end. May your once again be filled with peace and joy.

    sadaddy

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    The pain and hurt was present in this poem. well done, excellent.

    5/5 David

  • 18 years ago

    by Boy

    My friend,
    your peom is so short but believe me it realy touched my heart. i can understand the loss of your lost love. great job

    i will give you 5/5

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was great short but sweet 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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