Eternal Ember

by Daisy if you do   Jul 4, 2007


Hast thy love for me you weep
Lost in slumber sleeping deep
Midnight hour will come a falling
Deaths promise shall be calling

For my widowed heart you kept
When nightfall creeped you crept
Forevermore my souls surrender
Burns a flame to light the ember

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem well penned and well written ,very sad and yet it was a great piece , very good job keep it up , your friend Tracy d......5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Deaths promise shall be calling"

    This line really stood out to me. When you think about it, only two things are promised to us in life, life itself and death. A chilling poem, short but I loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    Wow great piece. Hauntly sad. Imagery is excellent.
    Take Care Cindy

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