Had to read that a few times but that was short sweet to the point very good i have enjoyed reading your work and ill be interested to read others

U sur do have a wonderful and brilliant way with words:D...if only all my poems came out this good hahah
ust loved it:D
gr8 job
tkae care
bree 5/5

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3

Your poem expresses your feelings really well. I loved reading it. Great job.

Corina

I say this is soo cute..

"We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint"

this is my fav line..=)

I say this is soo cute..

"We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint"

this is my fav line..=)

Wow this is perfect really just made it to the top of my list of favorites :) 5/5

Really nice poem. I see nothing that would need changing.
5/5

Great poem. very wise and simple. well controlled and not over the top. good stuff!!

Great Poem. Creative.
Everything A Poem Should Be.
:)
God Bless.

That last stranza was amazing simple yet powerful. .. I think we have simular styles you manged to bring true raw emotion. .. I loved it a master of the pen

Tony

This piece is so short, yet it really makes a statement. It is creative and so unique.

I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died

This is a wonderful way to start, it is gripping and almost like a riddle, in the way it kind of makes people think.

I almost wrote a poem to you
But the words came out wrong
I almost said I love you
While you listened to my song

There is emotion here, but not the simple, basic, same overused, tiered mundane emotion of I love you. It stands out. And its a nice touch.

I almost went to heaven
Before I was a saint
We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint

This provides such imagery, while the rest of the piece is description. Either way it is fantastic. Excellent piece. 5/5

Love it.. very sweet n full of emotion.. my favourite stanza was

I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died

reading this poem made me think of somebody special... good job 5/5

Love this. Gripping as always x