Time Passes By
by Brittany C Jul 5, 2007
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On the wings of a bird, |
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16 years ago
by Debbie
"time passes by [to] fast." - too.
Though Time seemingly passes by too fast, methinks that it provides sufficient allowance for us. It all depends upon how we use our time economically, or uneconomically. A nice read, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.
`Marian -
16 years ago
by Kara P
I love that, it was really good. and so very true, people work work and work, and then in a split second their life is over.
Very good poem !
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16 years ago
Happiness seems out of reach
for far to many people.
These lines are so deep and meaningful. Great, short-to-the-point poem!
Keep up the good work! -
16 years ago
To = too.
I like it, and I agree with every line.
You wrote is excellently, and it holds meaningful message.
-Happiness seems out of reach
for far to many people.
They just sit their watching
and doing absolutely nothing.-
^ This is so true.
Great job, keep up! 5/5 -
16 years ago
by SuicideQueen
No tonly is this poem well written, but its also incredibly true, which makes me genuinly like it. 5/5 xxx
