I like the way you formatted this poem.
My favorite couplet is
"Your the light to my dark, the wick to my candle,

I know if I ever have a problem it’s nothing you can’t handle.."

I could really relate to the lines
"What you do to me is something i cant even explain,

And the fact that i cant describe this feeling is driving me insane."

Although I don’t think the and is necessary and I would move the that to the first line

What you do to me is something that I can’t even explain,

The fact I can’t describe this feeling is driving me insane.

That would even out your syllables and make it easier to recite smoothly

Being experienced reciting poems I know that a pause can even the syllable count

In summary I am very impressed with the way you described you newfound passion that reminds me of being in love

I like the way you formatted this poem.
My favorite couplet is
"Your the light to my dark, the wick to my candle,

I know if I ever have a problem it's nothing you can't handle.."

I could really relate to the lines
"What you do to me is something i cant even explain,

And the fact that i cant describe this feeling is driving me insane."

Although I don't think the and is necessary and I would move the that to the first line

What you do to me is something that I canâ??t even explain,

The fact I can't describe this feeling is driving me insane.

That would even out your syllables and make it easier to recite smoothly

Being experienced reciting poems I know that a pause can even the syllable count

In summary I am very impressed with the way you described you newfound passion that reminds me of being in love

Wow. it was a great poem, i like the structure, it looks great. the way you write is just beautifully written. great work. 5/5

Aww.. that's really sweet, it was simple but beautiful - just like real love :) Flow was smooth, you have a great vocab.

And the fact that i cant describe this feeling is driving me insane.
^^ I really adore this line. I think everyone that is in love can relate to this :)

Thanks for sharing ^_^ And THANK you for the comment - it made me smile :)

I'll Message you when I have a new poem ^_^ TC.

I really really enjoyed reading this piece :) full of emotion wouldnt it be great if everyone could be that happy in a relationship!! anyway nice work!

I liked this one alot. i can really relate to this even though the guy i want to see hates me with everything.. oh well... the poem flowed very nicely. and i can also feel the emotions th rough the entire poem. i rated this a 5.

O wow i love the ending the last stanza was amazing to me, i hope you dont mind me commenting all of your poems....either way 5/5