Queen of Darkness (Whispers in the Night)

by KeyxMashingxParody   Jul 6, 2007


As the candles go out, and the moon rises again,
I sense the sickness in the air, the room begins to spin.
Darkness for all, darkness wont fall...
Come to me, to see it all.

As the clouds begin to roll, and all is dark in the sky,
I sense the feeling, crawling down my stiff spine.
Darkness for all, darkness wont fall...
Come to me, to feel it all.

As the rain begins to drip, and the wind, oh how it howls,
I sense the fear in it, as my ears begin to pound.
Darkness for all, darkness wont fall...
Come to me, to hear it all.

As the candles go out, and the moon rises again,
I sense the sickness in the air, the room begins to spin.
Darkness for all, darkness wont fall...
Come to me, come to me...
You will experience it all.

-Liz-

I know it's short, but I hope it creeps you out. lol

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  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    You had me from the very beginning when the candles went out. great job.

    your servant:
    david

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Lol it does creep me out

    it feels like a short of chant thats going to curse me. the repetition works well if it would to be used much longer however it would probably ruin it. so i think it works being short. well done xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Yeah it crept me out. Your poem is hort and sweet. I enjoyed each and every bit in this piece. Great write with sheer beautiful lines. The repitition has a lucid function. Keep it up. 5/5 all the way

    Tc
    with love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Creepy, not something i usually read but it was enjoyable.. very well written. keep up the good work though!

    Darkness for all, darkness wont fall...

    ^^^ the repitition of this line created a perfect image