Free At Last

by Sheree Speaks   Jul 7, 2007


My empty thought is like a bird
Flowing through the air.
It seems as if the world will turn
Without a single care.

AS I start to hate myself,
I realize that it's so true,
The world wouldn't be possible,
Without you.

And though the sky is turning grey,
And the wind is blowing fast,
You'll find out that you've caught your dreams,
And you'll feel free at last.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Megamidget3

    Me again! lol. nice poem again! love your writing! but, a little problem with this one is, your syllables again. for example:
    "AS I start to hate myself,
    I realize that it's so true,
    The world wouldn't be possible,
    Without you"
    look at the last line, 3 syllables...if u look at the other 2 stanzas, it flows more with more syllables at the end to match the 2nd line...you know? im just sharing tips of what ive learned over time. take it or not. but, 5/5. great job!

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