Comments : Until The Very End

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I started reading it and couldnt stop and wasnt sure what is was about but than i saw it was an Acrostic and i saw Cancer and it was so sad. This was very well written. I really liked it. The flow was perfect!

    Keep it up.
    Xx Chrissie

  • 16 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Awwwwwwwwww i loved it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shamia

    WOW...U r such a talented writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by -v-neE-

    It's been a long time since a read and commented your poems.. yet, it's still as wonderful as before... No, it should be more wonderful and well written!~ Really love your poems!~ =D

    Ok,back to the poem.. I felt quite sad when it says death on the way..Then it's even sadder when i read till the last sentence.I looked back at the peom and i read "CANCER"
    Awwwww~~~~~ sad,but nice! Really!~

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Flawless acrostic. I truely enjoyed reading this piece and its a pleasure to rrc this piece. Truely amazing. 5/5 all the way

    Lexically and poetically strong


  • 16 years ago

    by rachelle

    I like how you chose those words.
    very creative :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That's got to be one of the best acrostics that I have EVER read.
    The emotions were strong && it was very dark. :] I love it. Fabulous job. 5.5 :} Keep writing!

    - Stephyy <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    My girlfriend has cancer I wish she could see this but in a way it would be too harsh for her to read. And in that way it is so accurate.
    Have to add you to my favourites you have some brillant work

    E delahay

  • 16 years ago

    by Neha

    Beautifully written, and so powerful.
    I can't get enough of your poems and your quotes.
    Lol, I even added you to my favourites.=)
    You're very talented.
    Great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by JoJo

    Look i really do love this poem it is so beautiful, you are so talented and i just thought you might want to know

  • 16 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Your poems always seem to touch me in the deepest recesses of my heart, and this one is no different. I will forever stand in awe of your poetic ability. Beautiful...

  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    An amazing piece that really does discribe cancer from the prey's poing of veiw.. A really uniqe piece that stands out amongst the rest.. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This was truely amazing. wonderful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow. That just blew me away! The emotion, the imagery, the depth, it was all just flawless. The more I read from you, the more I am impressed. Well done *5/5*

    By the way, your quotes are amazing too :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Absolutely brilliant poem. Going in my favourites.

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I loved this acrostic b/c its true and it relates very well to the word. Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a very good poem nicole, always did like acrostics, and you did excellent with this one, portrays such sadness, love the flow and your choice in vocab is great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by megann anne

    Ya i added you to my favorites too. this was so sad. my cousin has cancer.. she entered remission, and we threw a big party for her, and 3 months later its back and worse before..
    anyways.. i loved the poem. way good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    I dont see many acrostics that rhyme, to be honest. Therefore, It comes to the degree where I don't like them.
    You did very well this this, and twisted it into a different sort of perspective, persay. I really enjoyed the complex vocabulary with the simple message. It got to the point, which was needed. I'm really very fond of this poem.

    Brilliant job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shannon Loter

    This is so good.
    my uncle recently died of cancer
    so i know how completely true this poem it.
    good job :]