I started reading it and couldnt stop and wasnt sure what is was about but than i saw it was an Acrostic and i saw Cancer and it was so sad. This was very well written. I really liked it. The flow was perfect!
It's been a long time since a read and commented your poems.. yet, it's still as wonderful as before... No, it should be more wonderful and well written!~ Really love your poems!~ =D
Ok,back to the poem.. I felt quite sad when it says death on the way..Then it's even sadder when i read till the last sentence.I looked back at the peom and i read "CANCER"
Awwwww~~~~~ sad,but nice! Really!~
Tis a very good poem nicole, always did like acrostics, and you did excellent with this one, portrays such sadness, love the flow and your choice in vocab is great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!
Ya i added you to my favorites too. this was so sad. my cousin has cancer.. she entered remission, and we threw a big party for her, and 3 months later its back and worse before..
anyways.. i loved the poem. way good.
I dont see many acrostics that rhyme, to be honest. Therefore, It comes to the degree where I don't like them.
You did very well this this, and twisted it into a different sort of perspective, persay. I really enjoyed the complex vocabulary with the simple message. It got to the point, which was needed. I'm really very fond of this poem.