Broken Fairy-tales (Sonnet VI)

by Bryan   Jul 8, 2007


Broken Fairytales (Sonnet VI)

I sit here reading broken fairytales,
I feel like everyone of them I live,
no happy ending, pain is all I dwell,
sadness is all that I have left to give.

If I had proved my love would she be here?
to hold me close, to tear my pain apart,
would my loneliness start to disappear?
as I write sonnets to my broken heart.

Time stands still as I gaze at her blushed face,
my happy ending starts to become true,
to see her walking with such flawless grace,
but my love for her she had never knew.

Broken Fairytales, its ending now known,
Spending the rest of life dying alone.

probably my last of this set of sonnets,
if you paid attention to my sequel, you will have noticed a line I use in this sequence of sonnets, look at line 8, if you read in the rest of my sonnets that sentenced is repeated, there may be a few words different but its pretty much the same line, it ties the whole set together, i probably will start a new set in the future.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Sweetie, this was an amazing piece. Yet again you have written an amazing piece. I truely did love reading this I found the emotions to be portrayed into quite stunning depth. The flow flawless as always. Keep up this beautiful work Ive loved all your sonnets so far =]

    ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    You have done a wonderful job on this set of Sonnets. The imagery is excellent as is the story line.

    I sit here reading broken fairytales,
    I feel like everyone of them I live,
    no happy ending, pain is all I dwell,
    and sadness is all that I have to give.

    How sad these lines are. Really tug at the heart.
    Take Care your friend Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "no happy ending, pain is all I dwell,
    and sadness is all that I have to give."
    `This couplet is so sad, it relatively touched my heart.

    You have, yet again, written a gorgeous sonnet, Bryan. In fact, its contents and theme (an unrequited love) endears me exceedingly. I further adored reading sonnets, and I believed you did it justice. :)

    An endearing work, nonetheless.

    Take care,
    Debbie Cakes

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Really good sonnet ....u write so well...good job

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is fantastic my favourite out of your sonnets, yeah i thought that 8th line sounds familiar but i couldnt remember where i had seen it till i finished your sonnet here lol good job and thx for the comment

    can wait for your new set of sonnets :):)

    keenan

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