Dawn's Youth {{haiku}}

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Jul 8, 2007


White lilies glisten,
In Summer's blanketing rays,
Over morning dew.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Why so many Haiku's? I'm not really able to say much on them, sorry.

    But anyways. This is very beautiful. The wording here descriped the dew so perfectly. The words played off each other from each stanza; beautifully done.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem, I like your choice of words :)