Confused

by Brittany C   Jul 9, 2007


Her head is spinning,
from all that she
has begun to feel.

Unable to see straight.
Not knowing which way,
she should go from here.

Ever minute seems to
be slowly pressing down,
trying to weaken her.

All thoughts building up
in her mind of him.
Are beginning to suffocate her.

But she fights back
and steadily frees herself.
Still not knowing which way to go.

    report violation
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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Sorry for that I think described. Again great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very original poem. Atmosphere is incredible... This piece is simple but very powerful. Topic is interesting and you describe3d emotions superbly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "strait" = "straight"...sorry to be petty lol

    "All thoughts building up
    in her mind of him.
    Are beginning to suffocate her."

    I love that stanza...its very true that love can take your breath away, whether it be positively or negatively..and captured that with this poem...great work! 5/5

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