You're my WORLD in this World.

by Molly Elizabeth   Jul 9, 2007


You're the beat in my heart
so gentle, yet so strong.
You're the struggle inside me
forcing me to go on.
You're the fight in me now,
when I'm ready to fall...
You're the love in my laughter
that makes me walk tall.

You're the passion in my kisses,
that were only meant for you.
You're the push in my step,
that always helps me follow through.
You're the courage in my walk,
that let's me know it's all okay.
You're the truth beneath the lies
I'm forced to live with every day.

You're the affection in my life
so intense, and so true.
You're the spark in my eyes
only when I envision you.
You're the love in my life,
that always keeps me wanting more.
You're my WORLD in this World,
the one I live forever for.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Every word of this poem is like a treasure, so full of love!

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Amazing. The flow was perfect and the vocab great:)
    It really read true with the heartfelt emotion's you laced through these touching words.
    It was a memorable read, and I loved every word.
    Very much enjoyed,
    Elaine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    The ending was perfect :) I like to tone in the poem :D Great vocab, flow was smooth. I enjoyed reading your poems, keep up the good work :D

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    That always keeps me wanting more.
    You're my WORLD in this World,
    the one I live forever for.

    my fave lines ^^

    it was romantic and emotional, it was an awesome poem, the way you grasp the idea and just keep going with it, truly amazing, beautifully written. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Life can get pretty hard at times and often it can really bring you down to the lowest of lows, but when you have the one you love beside you, it never seems to matter. Excellent job once again, very heartfelt 5/5 GG23

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