by Kat Tobias Jul 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As she holds her breath |
I liked it but it made me feel sad and wonder why life is so unfair to push people to hurt themselves and want to die... its a beautifully written poem even if it is sad... love it much like i love your writing style!! |
by Jenie
I loved it!!! u need to write more poems! |
by Si sI
Wow good poem.. i love it!! you should read mine sometime!! :)) |