MY PAIN

by CEE CEE   Jul 10, 2007


Sometimes I wonder
Why you do me like you did
I was juss a little gurl
A 7 year old kid
You took my innocence
You took my hope
You took it from me
And expected me to cope

AND YOU......
You hurt me most of all
You believed him
And told me i was a liar
You believed him
And left me with him all the time
Not knowing that young girls
Is wat he desired

I keep it inside
And all bottled up
And i tell know one
Hoping these dreams
will one day stop
It hurts me a lot
But it has made me stronger
Im ready to let go
And find myself inside
Im ready to let go
Im ready to take charge

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Overlooking the grammatical errors, I think this work was rather fine on the whole. What definitely enhanced this piece was the gurgling emotions embedded on it. It's quite nerve-wracking to note how a trusted someone refused to accept the truth. Oh, well, you finished it with a happy ending; I'm glad. Ha. =] All the best and take care, Marian.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a okay poem. Flow was smooth, Just a suggestion to use punctuations :)

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Good on you for letting go and taking charge. it will help you heal. well done xoxo

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