I love your poem , you are a very talented writer keep up the good work Steve 5/5

I love this poem the way you write is great, Steve is right , you have a real talent
take care your friend Phil

Great write...nice words and expressions yu use:d
loke it
good job!!
5/5
bree

Excellent poem well written and nice flow, wonderfully detailed and a joy to read as always from you . loved the ending super job:
I say goodbye
I am where I belong
In the air I am free
keep up the good work , your friend Tracy d 5/5

Good job on your descrptions. Keep writing.
Take care Cindy

Good job I like the imagery in the poem, keep up the good work. It flowed nicely. I think to improve this you just need to add more punctuations. :) But it's a great poem :D

5/5!

I like the substance. It puts me in mind of my contemplative aspect in life wherein silence takes refuge within. I myself take refuge in silence, rather. This was quite calming to read. Nice one, nevertheless. All the best and take care! ~Marian

This is a unique poem i have to admit. The rhyming scheme is unique and you have done it just the best. This is a very well structured poem with a flawless flow. 5/5 for sure

This is nicely done. =] You did it in a way that you can really picture yourself in this poem, if you'd close your eyes. ^^ And like Rex Hunter said.. you describe freedom very well =)!
5/5

Love this poem really good flow really enjoed reading it xx

Now this i really like you did very well :)

I like the feelings of peace, tranquility and freedom this write sends out. Well done!

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love it if u checked out some of my poems.... 5/5

Nazeer