My Doubts

by NIDAL   Jul 12, 2007


A Letter to Erica:

How can I embrace you?
When we are ripped apart by oceans of tears.

How can we share a common ground?
When I am the shades and shadows of olive brown,
And you are the only white diamond in my crown.

How can our love withstand?
When I am the dignity of the Arabian sands,
And you are the bearer of the cross, marching to retake the holy land.

How can we mend a broken heart?
When I am a lonely wolf standing up to the moon filled sky,
Grieving our future with a howling cry.

Is there any hope for us?
Darling, I see the sun rising over the darkness of my doubts,
And water flowing in the land of draught.

Yes, love and hope are always alive.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Beautiful. I love how it flows, and your use of metaphors. Very nice:)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... This is a very touching and heartfelt poem. I could feel the emotions you've expressed... and if this is a true story it is very heartbreaking yet interesting. I love the way you wrote this poem. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Janine Alford

    Very good poem.I liked how you used worldly object to compare you love.Keep up the good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sad But True

    How can we share a common ground?
    When I am the shades and shadows of olive brown,
    And you are the only white diamond in my crown.

    Loved this stanza, Great poem friend, 5/5. Yes what do we have if we loose hope, I do believe that sums it up nice, and its so true.

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    "Is there any hope for us?
    Darling, I see the sun rising over the darkness of my doubts,
    And water flowing in the land of draught.
    " these lines were beautiful in verse and meaning. The depth from which you speak this subject is apparent; if not personally then sympathetically.

    I believe we have that in common-always hopeful we will have captured the heart.

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