3 Minutes Left

by Elyse   Jul 12, 2007


My body is screaming

Im out of breath

Gotta stay focus

3 minutes left

My arms are throbbing

But still I work hard

Stealing the ball

From the unfocused gaurds

Running is painful

But still I sprint

I felt my bones shake

When I took that hit

Sweats in my eyes

But I gotta keep aim

Here at the line

I can win the game

My hands on my knees

The ref throws the ball

Square up take the shot....

And its a little off

I have one more chance

We can still tie

I take in a breath

And let out a sigh

Last try I thought

Or we'd be defeated

But that last chance

Was all I needed

A swish, perfect

I smile at the line

The buzzard sounds

Its over time

My body still screaming

And im still outta breath

But I gotta stay focus

3 minutes left....

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  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    This poem really gets the reader into the excitement of the game...makes me want to play.keep it up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    WOW! This was a really excellent poem! Very original! And the flow of this amazing poem was nicely done! You picked a great topic to write such a great poem! 5/5

    Aww, this poem is really sad and it's filled with lots of emotion. I really like it a lot. The flow of it was great! You really have a way with words. Keep on writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina