Lemon Dishes (Senryu)

by Crystal Gaze   Jul 12, 2007


Lemon scented soap,
Suds to the tips of elbow's,
Dishes being done.

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This poem was inspired by my Nana. Who always made the chores obligations but made them as fun as she could while doing so. xox

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Lol, I like it, very creative and imaginitive, great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Short & Simple, I like it! And I really like how you got the idea from your Nana.. She is always handwashing dishes I guess?

    5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Lol... Very interesting and unique topic. This poem is original and it is very fun.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This one was simple, yet beautiful. Excellent imagery. This poem was very unique, and very well written

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    This is a very cute poem... I like it a lot :-) You are very good at writing short, simple but very good poems!

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