Handle It With Care [Triolet]

Overall this is a nice poem with good wordings and you have well adhered to the rule. Keep it up. tc

Although I find the following line particularly fragmented: "Without love, I'm unable.", I think you've written this adorable work quite well and made justice to the form you'd brought into play. There is nothing else that I can further say other than its lovely and utterly endearing. A joy to read, nevertheless. :] 5/5

Best wishes,
Marian

Beautifully penned poem, The flow was smooth, I like your choice of words

My heart is breakable.
Without you, it's unbearable.
^^I find these two lines powerful ^_^

5/5! good job!