Girl, she cant get a break.

by Tricia   Jul 13, 2007


You sit here and watch the world pass you

fall down on the ground and throw your hands up in the air

I give up on you

I give up on me

I shall never be

Scenes play back slowly

Each breath gets shallow

The sigh in her voice lingers

Hands tremble as they turn into fist

your face hold backs every tear

but your eyes scream

help me

Im dying and nobody sees

No shades of gray its total darkness

gasp to say words

gasp for something normal.

Maybe she wasnt meant to be

anything more then the dust on this fatal broken floor.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    This is such a strong poem its so deep i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    I really like this poem very well done and so strong..i love the emotion and the simplistic balance of it all. defiently one of my favorite 5/5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats a good poem well done xxx