Sleep Deamon's (Senryu)

by Crystal Gaze   Jul 13, 2007


In the dark she sleeps,
silence always cloud's her as,
Inner daemon's wake.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Amazing.I love how short it is because it makes you think and imagine different things.
    Another great poem,
    A true 5/5,
    Rado =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem is a little different from the rest I have read so far. To me, this one sounds a bit creepy.. nothing wrong with that though, I like how this one is an odd ball in the group.

    5/5 ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem. You created powerful atmosphere with just a few words. It is really deep... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I voted this a 3 cause i didnt feel the way it was that short. you could of made this better by making it longer

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This poem was beautiful. I know how hard it is to protray the full emotion and elegance in haiku's but you did an excellent job in doing so!

    5/5