Without You (Doditsu)

by Jenni Marie   Jul 14, 2007


Without you, know I'd be lost
You're the one who completes me
Seeing you brings contentment
Can't live without you.

Doditsu-Consists of 4 lines, syllables going 7-7-7-5
Doesn't rhyme, and usually portrays humor or love as subject matter.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    This is very short, and yet it says everything, beautiful write, you show me that poems need not to many lines as long as they tell a story, great work.
    Phil

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is very good! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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