Woah. this was smooth put fast paced. the rhyming made me like it. after a while cliche cut poems bore me, but the the rhyming kept me reading it. "emo" poems should have something original in them. your skill was good. =]

I really got into this poem because i can relate 2 it a lot, still it was a great poem 5/5

I LOVE IT!!!! WOW IT ROCKS! I can realte to it alot too.. Please comment my poems .

This was a great poem...i can relate to it a lil...but i still loved this poem. keep it up and thanx for the comment on mine.

***ayshley***

Wow!!!! this poem is deep!! Its full of emotions and I love that.. I love the wayin which it flow and everything.. Its great poem but dont ever do that.. lol just kidding, I know you wont.. 5/5

To start off, the poem has depth and interest to it. Deffinatly a poem I think alot of people can relate to including myself. Good job.
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

Awosme writing it was amazing

Wow u have a graet poem here....
i like the flow and the imagery was good!
keep up the gr8 work!!

can u plz also read nd comment on some of my poems, especially some of the early stuff!!
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take care

Good poem.The flow was nearly flawless and unlike everyone else..I don't think that cutting poems are ''cliche''I write cutting poems but I make them my own because that's what they are.They are MY thoughts, MY feelings, and MY words.That's jusy MY opinion though.Great poem.5/5^_^

<3Amber

This poem was simple but great. It seemed to say more than words, quite hard to explain. But you did a wonderful job once again. I also really love how you can rhyme all your poems, that's a big hassle for me, but it seems to flow from your soul when you write. That's real talent, you're a wonderful talent, keep writing!

O.O this was a really strong poem, very creepy as well, but i liked your flow and wording, using simple rhymes and words work very well for your poems, and make them much more relatable and easy to understand.
beautiful poem by the way.
5/5
gabriella

WOW thats pretty good,and from me reading other peoples shit dam,they suck,anyways thats pretty good.

Oh wow O_O that is really strong. *tragic cough. xD*

Anyway I really like the way it ended.. It shows the emotions in this poem, well done.

OMFG. i love it.
i love how it ends,
"no one is around.
she slices it again and again,
and finally collapses to the ground. "
mind if i add it to my favourites?

--Trinity
5/5

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Again, great work.
sad subject, but I've written about things like that also.
keep up the great work.
keep your head up. 5/5

Thats a kind of sad-dark poem. it flows nicely with the words and the discription has lacked a little but i still like it. 5/5 !props!

Another suicide poem..
Seriously if you need to talk I'm more than willing to listen.

Anayways, I though it was very simple. Another straight to the point easy to read poem. I loved poems like that. Great job!

Cayce xx